The Story

2006-06-09T02:32:00.000-07:00

Background

Main Character

Name: Jake Stone
Age: 21
Occupation: None
Build: 6ft athletic
Personailty: Lazy, looking to get rich quick, quick thinker, intelligent.

The Story

I woke up with a thumping headache, I looked around my room, same as usuall it was would put a junkyard to shame. I had one of those nights again, didn't have a clue what I did last night.

Next to me was shane my best mate, always there for a good night out. My room stank of beer, I knew my mum would give me a lecture when I saw her, I want to move out live my own life, I just never seemed to have the finance to do that, my own fault really. I have never been able to keep a job for more then 6 months, I dunno I guess I just feel I have been destined for something bigger.

I went to the bathroom, opened the cupboard and found some apsirin. I rinsed the gel of my hair, I looked in the mirror again I noticed a number on my shirt collar. I tried to remember what happened last night and who gave me the number, but nothing blank.
"jake" called shane.

I went back to my room, Jake was just waking up.
"J what happened last night, I cant remember shit"
"I cant remeber either all I remember was the last drop of JD hitting my throat."
It was suprising to hear that Shane can't remeber what happened last night, he always remembers, I just hope we didn't do something stupid.

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My phone was ringing, It was a private number, "Hello"...

..."Yes this is Detective Dan, from the LAPD."
"Oh, um-mm...what can I help you with?" I began is sweat, I hope I didn't do anything illegal last night. "Yes I need you to come down to station this afternoon, around 3."
"What for?", I replied.
"Apparently last night you and your friend witnessed a murder, We need both of you to come down and tell us what you saw."
What a relief, I didn't do anything illegal. "I'm afraid I don't remember last night very well, but I will come down and do my best"...

Posted by Lunchbox

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"shit shane r u sure u dont remember anything about last nite, that was the fuckin LAPD saying we witnessed a murder, where the fuck were we man?"
"Murder what murder? whose murder? called out shane from the bathroom"
"i dunno man but who saw us witness a murder?"

RING RING

"hello"
"you tell the cops anything, and you and your friend will pay"
"what, who's this, how did u get this numb..." -Line goes dead

Posted by Dan
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I hung up the phone with my shaky hand. "Shane get the fuck out here now," I yelled.
Shane walked out of the bathroom, "What, What" he said. "I just got a phone call from some guy saying that if we tell the cops anything, we both will pay."
"Oh, fuck" Shane said.
"What are we going to do?" I said.
"I have no idea."

-Later that day-

I was scared all morning, but Shane kept saying it was probably a prank call. I told him that there was no fucking way some one would say that as a prank, especially right after the cops just called.
"Shane what are we going to do, it's almost 3 should we go to the police?" I asked
"Hell yes, the last thing we want to for the police to think we did it"
"You have a good point" I replied.

All of the sudden I heard a crash, I turned around and saw that our window was broken. "Oh fuck, what is that" Shane said. I look down, it looked like a grenade. When it stopped rolling it made a pop and tons of smoke started pouring out. The smoke started to quickly fill the room.

"Shane, it's a smoke grenade" I said
"lets get the fuck out of here" He replied. We ran for the door. As we were catching out breath in the hallway of our apartment, we turned around and looked at our door. Shane said coughing a little, "Oh my god, who the fuck are we dealing with"
On the door, in runny red spray paint read, "Say anything and you DIE" I was so scared I turned aside and threw up, I was in complete shock...

Posted by Lunchbox

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How It works and Rules...

2006-06-09T02:10:00.000-07:00

How it works?

Basically I will start a story and the idea is that you carry it on from where I have left off, I will start the post and you can leave your continuing part as a comment for that post. Once it get long I will do another post with all the comments in and continue again.

Rules

Just a few rules about the story

The story topic can continue to anything, just make sure it links on to the previous story. (No offensive subjects please).
New chracters can be introduced in the story however the story must focus around the main character.
The minimum continuing story must be at least a paragraph and there is no limit to the maximum.
You cannot end the story.

I may add/edit new rules as I progress.

Thats it so read the story and get posting!

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The Story

How It works and Rules...